What Goes Around Comes Around II
A Detective Chronicles Story By Mad Max - Photo By The KidnapHer

Jill Valdisar could barely contain her excitement. Her rival for the affections of
Tommy Baritone, Suzette, was tied to the railroad tracks and in less than half an
hour the 5:15 would come along and do Jill’s dirty work. 

Suzette, screamed for help thru her gag and writhed against the ropes that bound her,
but seemed to have no hope of escape. Moments ago, she had gotten a call on her cell---
but tied up and lashed to the tracks, the beauty had no chance of asking for help.

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What neither girl realized was that Tommy Baritone was a jealous lover, and when
Suzette didn’t immediately answer had used his contacts to find where her GPS indicated his
“cumare” was located. His temper was legendary, and when he and his goons
arrived on the scene, his anger exploded against his former moll.

Before Jill could grasp the turn of fate, not only was Suzette rescued--- but Tommy had
told his men to put Jill on the tracks in her place! Legs and torso looped with rope,
her hands behind her back, a bright red bandana gagging her, Jill was helpless. 
Then it got worse; “strip her naked!” Tommy barked, a task his henchmen were only
too eager to obey. In a flash her pretty outfit was cut and ripped from her nubile body, and the
sun beat down on the body Tommy had once enjoyed. Surely he wouldn’t leave her like this!

“That will teach you to mess with me” Suzette sneered, glorying in her fortune as the tables had turned. 
Jill could only moan thru the cloth in her mouth and struggle helplessly on the cold track. Her struggles
doubled when she first detected the vibration of the coming 5:15 on the rails. 
Her legs strained at the ropes, her chest heaved with the effort, but unless someone
came along, she was doomed. As the gangsters sped away in their SUV’s,
Jill could only hope the engineer would see her nude body in time to brake….